That was really good. I don't even know these characters and I liked it a lot. Your writing is so descriptive and you do a great job of showing how the characters feel. I didn't think that the ending was abrupt at all. I am so jealous that you've come up with this based on a picture.

Now you've got me really looking forward to the Brandon and Maria fic! Good luck even though you don't need it. I know you're going to do a great job on it!