(Drabble #7) Moving On - 1xR

[beck]

This is in response to the latest drabble challenge found here::

http://www.blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/viewtopic.php?t=3434


And here is my part::

I think I wanted to cry while writing this, I just can't be mean to any of the characters let alone let them suffer (unless its for a good reason ^_~) I hope this sounds okay, I wanted to try something out for this one too. *wipes snotty nose on shirt sleeve*

nemkess I think this drabble would be right up your alley too.

Title: Moving On
Rating: *shrugs*
Word Count: 123 (I tried to keep it at 120)
Pairing: 1xR

Standing along the shore watching the sun melt into the sea, the faint biting pain in his clenched fist only served as a reminder of why he felt so lost, so worthless and on top of that, pissed off.

Right when he thought it was the right time to ask her, he never imagined what the outcome was going to be.

The look of shock and then disinterest was clearly marked all over her face. Her blonde tresses danced along her back when she shook her head "I can't do this Heero. I've learnt to get over you and move on. I can't be living my life on what if's."

She handed him the ring and turned to live her life without him.





Nothing says better than make up sex though ^___^

Comments

[wardove.livejournal.com]

wowzers, Beck, great job.

I never knew you wrote this, or did I and in my drug induced state just don't remember you telling me? ;P

[yankeerose69.livejournal.com]

Hehehehehe no, you didn't miss this. I just wrote that up last night when I saw the new Drabble challenge posted on BI.

Hoping I'll have a bit of spare time, I'll get to work on your WHR fic and the FMP one too. Words can't describe how much I love the WHR fic.

I most likely won't be around tomorrow after I get off work since I'll probably be going straight to bed cause we have that concert to go to Fri night. But I am taking off work so thats always a plus, I should be around all weekend though.

Awesome!

[nemkess.livejournal.com]

I just love fics/drabbles where Relena gives Heero his walking papers and not the other way around! And I especially love longer fics where Heero fights to get her back *cough*hinthint*cough* ^_^

Re: Awesome!

[yankeerose69.livejournal.com]

I'm usually not the type to write angst or braek up/walking out fics but yes, your right, I too like it when Rel is the one with the upper hand and sends him packing. When its the other way around, he's such a bastard who makes me want to hurt in every way imaginable. Its one of the things I don't see how ppl can have a heart when they write those terrible 1x2 fics where Heero treats her like shit or make Rel into the total Bitchzilla who makes sure that if she's not happy, those around her can't be either.

And I especially love longer fics where Heero fights to get her back *cough*hinthint*cough* ^_^

Me too, he's gotta grovel and BEG for it!!! *evil sadistic grin* But I came up with ideas on the make up sex fic for this angsty drabble. Not sure if I will have it a lemon or a lime. Gotta see what my mind decides on.