Ok... as an English Mjr.... there were SO MANY changes you could have made.
Yeah I actually feel that way alot about my fics, hence why I was never good at the whole english bit even in school. I also think its why I sometimes get the feeling that its not even worth posting cause it sounds so dull.
Finding beta's are hard to find. If I knew that you had a bit of time, you could look over my stuff for me too as well as my other helper. I don't write too often so its not like I'd be bombarding you with 20 pages of one chapter.
Feel free to actually go over this fic and send me your corrections if you like, I know I'd be interested in seeing whatever changes there is.
As a Trowa fan..... there were SO MANY THINGS YOU COULD HAVE ADDED!!!!
*pout*
hehehehhe I knew you were going to say that. I was going to add a bit more to the end but I just wanted the fic done and didn't bother to delve into it so much. Plus I hate messing with endings.
There won't be more to this fic but I do have a 11x3 lemon in the making. ^_~
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Re: ARG
Date: 2004-05-14 03:06 am (UTC)Yeah I actually feel that way alot about my fics, hence why I was never good at the whole english bit even in school. I also think its why I sometimes get the feeling that its not even worth posting cause it sounds so dull.
Finding beta's are hard to find. If I knew that you had a bit of time, you could look over my stuff for me too as well as my other helper. I don't write too often so its not like I'd be bombarding you with 20 pages of one chapter.
Feel free to actually go over this fic and send me your corrections if you like, I know I'd be interested in seeing whatever changes there is.
As a Trowa fan..... there were SO MANY THINGS YOU COULD HAVE ADDED!!!!
*pout*
hehehehhe I knew you were going to say that. I was going to add a bit more to the end but I just wanted the fic done and didn't bother to delve into it so much. Plus I hate messing with endings.
There won't be more to this fic but I do have a 11x3 lemon in the making. ^_~