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Beck ([personal profile] beck) wrote2006-06-08 04:32 pm

[Bleach smut drabble] #2 - barbecue - Ichigo/Orihime

Next installment for [livejournal.com profile] bleach_quickies.

Character: Ichigo/Orihime
Prompt: barbecue
Words: 171



Ichigo couldn’t stop staring at Orihime eating the barbecue ribs. Sauce was smeared on the sides of her mouth and if she wasn’t quick enough, it would drip into her cleavage or onto the front of her sundress. She didn’t have a care in the world as she giggled at how she was a messy eater. Ichigo knew he had to take matters into his own hands before Yuzu ruined the moment with her fretting. Pulling Orihime by the arm, Ichigo walked her into the bathroom, sat her on the counter, and helped clean her up.

“Sorry about making such a mess.”

”Don’t worry about it.” He then leaned forward to lick around her mouth and continued farther down till he reached the trail of sauce between her breasts.

The movement of her hand stopped him at mid-lick as she reached between them and tugged at his zipper.

“Kurosaki-kun, I’m in no hurry to get cleaned up just yet, are you?”

Ichigo smirked as he settled between her thighs. “Not at all.”

~*~

I have one more prompt to write but not sure which one to really use 'paper clip', 'sticker', or 'tiara'.

(Anonymous) 2006-06-09 02:55 am (UTC)(link)
I've got to hand it to you. You're amazing, you know that?

There aren't much IchiOri fics out there, much less naughty ones, so I must declare my undying love that I have for you for writing this.

And I'm in no hurry for you to write more smut IchiOri. =D

[identity profile] era-chan.livejournal.com 2006-06-09 03:35 am (UTC)(link)
Oooohhh...naughty, naughty. More of IchiOri, please!!!!

[identity profile] yankeerose69.livejournal.com 2006-06-09 02:41 pm (UTC)(link)
I have one more to post today and I hope it sounds okay, I felt that it could have a little more to it but didn't know which way to take it.

[identity profile] era-chan.livejournal.com 2006-06-10 03:50 am (UTC)(link)
I'll read it! *runs to read it*

[identity profile] kumagoro-usagi.livejournal.com 2006-06-09 06:58 am (UTC)(link)
Much love. I don't usually see Ichi/Ori smut and you do in such a cute way.

[identity profile] yankeerose69.livejournal.com 2006-06-09 02:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, I can imagine that smut with this pairing is very hard to come by. Since I don't ship IchiRuki, I felt a warmth for IchiHime after re-reading manga 1-3 during Memorial Day weekend (since those were the only vol's I brought with me when we went camping). And you are getting a rare treat from me cause I'm usually not much of an Ichigo fan. I'm glad you have liked these so far.

[identity profile] kumagoro-usagi.livejournal.com 2006-06-09 08:49 am (UTC)(link)
Oh. And you should totally do tiara. XP

: Friends de yankee :

[identity profile] yankeerose69.livejournal.com 2006-06-09 09:05 am (UTC)(link)
After stewing over the ideas for those prompts, I think I came up with something decent for tiara. I just hope I can get it to work the way I want it to. Sometimes those word limits can be a real pain.

: Friends de yankee :

Sure, feel free to do so.

[identity profile] kumagoro-usagi.livejournal.com 2006-06-09 09:12 am (UTC)(link)
Woo hoo, Tiaras for the win! :p Hopefully the next quickie you'd write would be for Renji ehh? ^_^

:goes to friend list:

[identity profile] yankeerose69.livejournal.com 2006-06-09 02:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Well I hope that the character picked for next week is either Rukia or Renji, I'm so stoked to see what I can write for those two together with smut.

I'm sure I'll be doing more IchiHime when Orihime is the character for the week she is chosen.

[identity profile] avi-via-vai.livejournal.com 2006-06-09 03:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Jeez, between the last one and this one... X_x IchiOri smut is really hard at come by (probably moreso then IshiOri smut) ANd I always have problems with OOC-ness, which this doesn't really have, and is just far too amusing. XD

[identity profile] yankeerose69.livejournal.com 2006-06-09 03:27 pm (UTC)(link)
X_x IchiOri smut is really hard at come by

So it seems O__O. How sad too. I'm still not much of an Ichigo person but I grew fond of IchiHime again after re-reading vol 1-3 during the holiday. I'll probably write more of them the next time that Orihime is picked for the character of the week.

And I always have problems with OOC-ness, which this doesn't really have, and is just far too amusing. XD

OMG! You just don't know how hard it is for me to make them come out as IC. And I blame that on Ichigo since he will always seem asexual to me. I'm pretty picky myself on how I write my characters, I think thats why I don't read much Bleach fics cause of the OOC problem. And the thing about this comm is that some of the prompts, you look at them and see the character that is chosen and you're scratching your head going "that's nearly impossible for that character to behave in such a way." I think as long as the prompts are too stupid, it shouldn't be overly hard (I hope).

I try to add some sort of amusement in them cause Ichigo is a dumb silly teenager I'm sure when it comes to sex and not fighting.

I just hope this last one I completed this morning sounds okay. I'm a bit nervous on how it turned out.

I just want Rukia or Renji to be the character chosen next damn it!

[identity profile] avi-via-vai.livejournal.com 2006-06-09 04:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Well there is only one other character that is really hard for me to see them having sex with anyone and that would be Yumichika. Though most pairings for him make sense (except Isane. O_o I still don't understand that one.) but I'm just not much of a fan of him in any case.

OOC-ness is the reason why I can't stand IchiRuki fandom anymore. XD

I have your other drabble in another tab- hopefullyI'll get around to reading it. Gah. Work is distracting.

[identity profile] scarbie.livejournal.com 2006-06-14 03:48 am (UTC)(link)
As much as I liked the first drabble I like this one even more. I can see this scene playing out between those two easily. And it just really feels like Orihime and Ichigo. I'm looking forward to seeing what else you've got up your sleeve!