Not bad. Not as good as the first two, but that is just my taste. Anyway, care to hear a suggestion/critic? I think that Ichigo should be more INVOLVED into the ACT. He sounded and feels [to me] like he is not 'into' it as Orihime since he has the time to "willed himself not to snort in amusement". If he has time to think about it in that much context (okay, in those first two sentences) then the feeling of the naughtiness is dimmed. My suggestion would be for Ichigo to think about the bubble tiara/crown and how that ended in a 'delightful' interlude of *cough* fucking. That said, the idea of the tiara and the bath scene is great together, and when the challenge of Renji and/or Rukia comes up, I'll be one of the eager ones who'll want to read them. Great job on your contributions , Beck!